Two Reviews for the Bench

So on March 4 I was told it would take a few days for The Bench to show up on Amazon. In fact it showed up on the 4th. I’ve just been too busy to post them til now.


Review on


Review on


One more due to come unless some of you would like to purchase and review. 😀



When her faith had died

When her faith had died,

she hoped he would not fail her,

but as time went on,


Their life continued

his voice like a trumpet’s blare

sent out warning notes


Her heart drummed loudly

she wondered if he was true

one more chance she gave


Watchful eyes waited

she sensed his interest fade

taut violin strings


Time passed so slowly

his flute shrilled piercing her soul

powerless she wept


Luck found her at last

the time had come to leave him

when her faith had died.



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3 Responses to Two Reviews for the Bench

  1. historysleuth1 says:

    Very powerful poem. I could feel what she was feeling. Congrats on your release!

  2. Very nice, thanks for posting the sample 🙂

  3. Your cover is awesome. Congratulations on the release.

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